I'm living in my past
and can't help but think
that our relationship
won't last.
As the tears reflect
from my eyes
I can still remember
all the lies.
And through it all
I still have yet to fall,
do you know how hard it is
to keep a level head?
With all the lies that
are told and spread
no one knows it's myself
that I truly dread.
I always screw things up
that's my fear with you
I'll mess things up
and everything will end
between me and you.
All I want for you to do
is hold me close
erase all my fears
just tell me that you care.
You have to live life to the fullest
take everything it brings,
it gave me you.
I'll hold you close,
just tell me you won't
be like everyone else
and break my heart.
Author notes
no me and my boyfriend did not break up...but i don't think he knows how deep my feelings for him are...i wish he knew but i don't think he ever will...
Written March 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by DistilledGin.
300 points, ended March 23, 2006, 14 entries
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thats really an emotional poem
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wow this is an amazing poem! but its very sad. i hope u and him dont break up. break ups are hard. well hang in there!
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well a day after this poem me and him broke up...he did it not me...and he never read this...and probably never will now...we had a wonderful relationship while it lasted...so yea it's all good...i miss him and he still calls so i'll be ok...but i'm glad you liked this poem...<3Anna
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I know how you feel and I wish you luck with your boyfriend. I hope you two have a wonderful relationship together. Also, I really like this poem a lot.
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thank you for the comment...i think that's love is the strongest feeling out there...but it's the more oriainal topic...but i still wrote it...thanks again...Anna
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This is perfect....Strong love...I get that
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thank you for your comment...i'm thinkin about showing it to him...i also think he needs to know...and what i'm doing is putting all my poetry about him into a notebook and gining it to him...i hope he like it...thanks again...<3Anna
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amazing
well i sincerely hope that you show this to your boyfriend, he really needs to know your innermost fears, this will show you what to expect, it is those fears that are the real destroyers of connections, once those fears are no longer hidden there is nothing to fear, show him the poem and then allow him in to your world, completely -
thank you...you have been there for me and you know what i'm thinkin most of the time...i thank you very much for being there...<3Anna
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nice job...looks around ummm so yea pokes keep up the good work, and yeah im off walks off
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lol...thank you...this is the finished one...i'm glad you liked it...some times being alike is a good thing...i love you too...<3Anna
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amazing
i love it!! OMG! i told u that before but this is flippin awesome!! and is so whats on my mind lately..word for word. lol..we are too much alike...i love you! bbyes and good luck!!
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