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Morning Breeze

Morning Breeze

 

In a morning breeze

 

                        as my breath is taken away from me

 

I insist, let me be,

 

                        to reckon,

 

                                    to exist,

 

In another day,

 

                        In another way,

 

                                    In a morning breeze...

Author notes

the painting is Pino's Morning Breeze.
Written March 17th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Bazza
    April 21, 2006
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    Short and sweet


  • Mila7
    March 25, 2006
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    Thank you so much for your comment!!

  • chuff
    March 24, 2006
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    fulfilling

    Very short, yet fulfilling.
    It seems to have done its job well.

    I admire poets who can do a lot with succinct(-ity? -itude?)

    Congratulations on a fulfilling poem!


  • Mila7
    March 19, 2006
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    Im deeply honored for your comment!!


  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 18, 2006
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    A beautiful write and presentation. Lovely flow and form. Expressive. Well crafted and a much enjoyed read.

    Shelley


  • Mila7
    March 18, 2006
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    Extremely greatful!!


  • Mila7
    March 18, 2006
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    Thank u so much for ur comment!!!


  • stoneage silver member
    March 18, 2006
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    I agree, this is spiritual.

  • nativeshorty
    March 17, 2006
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    thats a nice short sweet poem


  • March 17, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Short and beautiful! I love the pic!

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