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The Question

 

“Do these pants make me look fat?”
She asked twirling around the room

 

(they’d fit better if she didn’t eat all that jellow this afternoon)

 

So I swiftly replied:
“no, it’s not the pants that make you look fat—
“those poor things are doing everything to hold you in
And just remember, violence is a sin!”

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Written March 17th, 2006

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  • darkminded
    March 31, 2006
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    gota love ya spin, this made me laugh


  • Raazi
    March 26, 2006
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    LOL! I just remembered that I was supposed to return the favour. Well....cool! This was so funny. lmao. Great job.

  • fangtacular
    March 21, 2006
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    lol i echoe all those sentiments!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 20, 2006
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    lmao..this is a cute and yet nifty poem love the answer.. keep penning..Linda


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 19, 2006
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    Brave

    A great response. I've often felt like uttering a similar response but never dared.
    Once again you are teaching me new ways to say things.
    Jim S


  • jaunty pill gold member
    March 18, 2006
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    You're humor is a nice pick-me-up during a cold and silent period of time. Winter is still beating at my door with an angered bite.

    And spring seems far on the horizon, so it's nice to bellow out a warm laugh to make things feel a little brighter.

    You are truly human, Kryspin, a one-woman show of brilliance.

    much love,
    James


  • sewasham gold member
    March 18, 2006
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    Lol. A clever bit of writing here. Is there always room for Jello? Apparently not. Good job I think this is a winner. Take care and Have fun. Steve

  • fangtacular
    March 18, 2006
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    lol hilarious! those poor pants are doing everything to hold you in
    great as always


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 18, 2006
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    i think i tried something like that, i they still can't find me balls, this is a a funny poem, you went someoner out the park with it and that is what makes it killer, keep it flowing

  • the chase
    March 17, 2006
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    Hehe.

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