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The Hallway of Fears

I stand at the top<o ></o >

Looking down<o ></o >

My thoughts stop...<o ></o >

The hallway of fears.<o ></o >

<o > </o >

The door is shut-<o ></o >

Closed long ago,<o ></o >

The walls close in<o ></o >

The ceiling is low.<o ></o >

<o > </o >

It goes on forever;<o ></o >

Continuing into infinity<o ></o >

And I shall never-<o ></o >

Reach the top.<o ></o >

<o > </o >

It is the hallway of fears,<o ></o >

I am so petrified of,<o ></o >

My mind pounds to get out-<o ></o >

Trapped like a caged dove.<o ></o >

<o > </o >

I look behind me<o ></o >

At this stairway I have climbed,<o ></o >

I search and I see,<o ></o ></o >

<o > </o >

I look back and remember<o ></o >

All of my pain and strife,<o ></o >

I see the closed door behind me,<o ></o >

How my problems overflowed to a knife.<o ></o >

<o > </o >

It is the hallway of fears behind me,<o ></o >

As I stand and gaze; caught in time,<o ></o >

But it is not the hallway I see,<o ></o >

Instead, it is, my life.<o ></o >

<o ></o >

<o ></o >

<o ></o >

Author notes

I wrote this poem based on a picture, during my hospital stay.
Written March 17th, 2006

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  • Heartaches Lullabye
    March 19, 2006
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    Hey Holly...
    Yeah, I realized yesterday that there were smiley faces. I'm not quite sure what's up with that... I'm going to try to fix it. Either delete it and try again, or... something.

    Anyway, thank you so much for always being there for me. It means a lot to me, especially right now. I'm writing you an email, trying to tell you some more about what's going on inside this twisted mind. (Isn't that in a song or something?!)

    ANYWAY...
    Thanks again!!!!!

    BFF
    GNome


  • FountainClassics
    March 18, 2006
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    Hey Gnome,
    this is really good...but what's with the smiley faces I keep seeing?