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Death

Darkness, Sadness, Silence, that is what we are, that is what we remain for, and that is what owns us, in Death.

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Super short, I know, but hey I think it says everything about dying and beings left behind (ghosts). I sound so serious, lol.
Written March 17th, 2006

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 16, 2007

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    Powerful write in it's brevity.
    I think the meaning and understanding are strong.
    I would suggest you breaking down the lines to make it read with more strength.


  • individuality gold member
    December 17, 2006

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    a good piece, ah but while death is in the distance waving, life is here kicking it back spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • Tercil gold member
    April 7, 2006
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    To expect these three things in death? I'd opt to erase the middle one, but then, we may be speaking about those who we have left behind, darker, sadder and silenced. Lovely, and wise write.


  • Evil Fuzzy
    March 22, 2006
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    Awww, grandpa go bye bye? I'm sorry. Tigger gives you and hope you feel better. Tigger give you lots of candy too...alien shaped

    Love u Bunny!


  • buffsab99
    March 20, 2006
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    excellent

    this is so sad but true. i am feeling this right now with the recent passing of my grandfather. tigger you know exactly how to write what i am feeling


  • March 17, 2006
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    ALOT SAID IN A SHORT POEM. AWESOME

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