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i love you.

i wanted to hold you close
to take your pain away
i could see it in your eyes
and i was wishing you could stay

though you wouldnt admit it
i could see that it was there
you looked so sad and lonely
so im here to say "i care"

if only for a second
you could understand
ill wipe away these tears
when you offer me your hand

you can look into my eyes
ill never wrong you again
no mind games-no lies
ill give u your fairy-tale-end


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its not done... deal with it
Written March 17th, 2006

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  • No1KnowzMyName
    March 17, 2006
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    I like it..
    Says so much in very little..
    you did a great job!

    -Brittany


  • CrazyBeauty
    March 17, 2006
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    LOOOOOOOOOVE IT

    ooooooooooh...i love this...i totally do