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Katie Jane

Katie Jane
With her messy brown hair
Jumped up, up, and down
With her Velvety Bear.

Skip, skip, skip
Katie Jane
The world's not sad
For happy little girls.

Not even for scrubby,
Velvety Bears.

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Written March 17th, 2006

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  • tonner
    May 26, 2006
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    this is a great poem. it really captures a beautiiful image of a happy little girl. good write


  • Cherokee
    April 15, 2006
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    I read it twice too but I liked it both times. It is really cute. I love it. It has a deeper meaning though to me. I hope she stays happy. Good one.


  • Nermine
    April 15, 2006
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    awesome

    i had to read it twice too...u can sing it to any child, its lovely


  • spamwitch
    April 15, 2006
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    What a very intriguing poem, seems very twisted in a sense, like a nursery rhyme of the Mother Goose type. Cute idea worked here. I had to read it twice, to be sure I read it right,, well done!