Is it over our romance dead
Due to the stupid words I said
No more stroll in the clover
Our romance dead is it over
Remember dear the joys we had
Mostly quite calm sometimes quite mad
Glowing whenever we were near
The joys we had remember dear
Let's try again not surrender
Don't let this be a love ender
And change the now back to the then
Not surrender let's try again.
Author notes
Option 5.Love gone wrong.Written March 17th, 2006
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What did you think
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I love your use of this form, its very fitting for the confusion that usually lingers in these kind of relationships. Excellent write!
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Thank you for your heartfelt piece, Josie
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This made me smile
I really like the way you have written the poem.
Hope can be such a horrid thing at timtes and the impression I get from this poem is someone is hoping for a 2nd chance.
Because of the simpleness of this poem, it makes it even better
Well done, thank you and good luck in my contest.
Rebecca
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a little rough in flow, but you are are experimenting well with this form.
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I don't know what a swap quatrain is, but this is a good poem. I didn't quite get it, but it was still good.
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good
hey..this is really good..i have no idea wat a swap Quatrain is but i like this poem...its full of emotion and flows well...nice job..good luck...
xox Tash
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good poem!
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okay the problem is what did you say???
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well written
Emotional and well written. Nice job, and good luck to you.
Victoria -
Feeling and emotional, nice write, is ender a word? Nevermind. It was good either way .nice job and good luck.
~Cookie
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