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Just another teenage fear




The Stars are whispering you =secrets=
Some things are already .said.
    Razorblades have been b.r.o.k.e.n...
And another teenager had bl Ed

She had been alone and a b u s e d
They didn't even care,
    She ad no one to *stop* her
The razors were the only things there

Jackets hid his ((.masterpiece.)) arms
Where all his <3 heart had been...
    Protected by his razor blade
He paints his story on his ''''''Skin''''''

The [[Miss]] understanding of these teens
The ones you //all// ignore
     Broken and drained cold they lay
On this cold bl00dy floor

The WORLD  has shut out their tear.s.
and ||misplaced|| their eyes from another bruise.
     Until they were looking up at them
On the TV screen from the mid.night news.

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Written March 17th, 2006

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  • Dark Angel09
    May 27, 2006
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    I really like poems like this because I've been through it. Very nice job, this really caught my emotions.


    -Dark <3

  • Word
    March 19, 2006
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    I usually dislike this topic and most poems about this topic but you made it your own and captivated me.
    Thanks for the read
    -brit

  • Word
    March 19, 2006
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    I usually dislike this topic and most poems about this topic but you made it your own and captivated me.
    Thanks for the read
    -brit

  • OurxBeginning
    March 19, 2006
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    Oh wow..this is really sad. A lot of emotion in every word. I loved the layout of this. Awesome job and keep it up. I hope to read some more from you.

    ~Morbid[♥]