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The Ghost Of You

The day I realized I love you
Is the day you said goodbye
The way you were always true
Made my heart fall from the sky

Now that your gone, I wait
For you to pick it up again
No matter how late
Or even in the falling rain

I can still feel you around
I can hear the beat of your heart
I can still see your footprints on the ground
I love you more then ever now that we are apart

The ghost of you is calling my name
I want you back, and I’ll never let go
Because this is a big burning flame
That will always have a glow

You’re the other half of my soul
You loved me for me, but I just couldn’t see
In my heart you fill the hole
Where no one else could ever be

I want to see you just one more time
Because then maybe, I could say I love you
Without me thinking its such a big crime
But now that your gone, you will never have a clue

That I do and will always love you
But it will never be, because I was always to shy
To tell you all the things that were true
Now all I can say is goodbye

Author notes

I was just looking at your contest and i thought i would try it cuz i really liked the title the ghost of you..lol i dont know why..i just htought i could do something with that..hope you like it..
Written March 17th, 2006

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  • xVowsareSpoken
    April 1, 2006
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    Squiem ---

    Thank you so much for entering my contest. I love the first stanza of the poem because I can relate to it. I loved the poem.

    Well done job, Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck!
    Take Care,
    x PatientGrace x
    Jasmine