*He was my first
I trusted him
I loved him
I cared for him
And he hurt me
He took my pureness
And left me with emptiness
Stole my happiness
Now I can't believe
He is treating me like this
I gave him all of me
Why all his love had to leave
Maybe I was just to blind to see
That he was basically just using me
How could I be so stupid
Why did I let him hurt me
I can't believe I gave him the best of me
I thought he was special indeed
Thought love was something I need
But I see that it hurts to fall in love
And it hurts to fall out of love
But it hurts more when I found out
That he never loved me from the start
Now I have to fix my broken heart
To him I was just a mission
And I guess his mission was completed
I guess you weren't what I needed.....*
Author notes
*maurice
Written March 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- What hurts the most by liriel.
300 points, ended May 7, 2006, 14 entries
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i'm sorry, that sux. i never had my virginity taken away from me like that, i ended up being with mine for almost 2 years. very nice job good luck.
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I like this and can really relate. I too have gone through this recently. It sucks. And the pain is unexplainable. The only thing I would change about this poem would be to change
"Well,I guess you wasn't something i needed"
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good write
I enoyed your emotion, and wording. Good write. It is hard to love and get hurt, I have experienced that many times, and it never gets easy. I will say however it is better to love, than to never love at all.
Good luck with your next one
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i like i like
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I can relate to this as well. Not in so extreme a way but I can. Someone recently treated me like I was something to amuse and then discarded me when his eyes strayed to someone else. A powerful piece and painful. It gets better with time...that feeling. It really does.
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i love it i definitely can understand and relate to it..good luck in the contest !
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This is an awesome poem and very emotional and understanding. Although I haven't experienced anything like this, I can understand. Great job!
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Hey great write, i like it. I'm sorry whoever this was about is a jackass and again i'm sorry. GOOD LUCK in the contest
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A most powerfully emotional write, i can relate to the feelings here... Josephine.
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thats a well written poem! it seems most guys are doing that, and it sucks when it happens to you. hope you get over that guy, as i did i got screwed over aswell.
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