The First Kiss is the most
anticipated and important
part of a Relationship.
The gentle touch.
The firm embrace.
The teasing of his
soft lips.
Her moan when the kiss
finally commence.
Their tongues lingering
around getting to know
one another.
One minute, two minutes,
five minutes long.
Hands searching and learning
the others body.
The heat between the two is
greater than a wild fire in
the forest.
Just as fast as this Kiss starts
it ends.
Because.......
It is the First Kiss of Many....
Yvonne J. Griffin
02/09/03
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Written February 9th, 2003
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sooo true and so sweet...great words to capture the meaning of the moment..sweet!
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Ooo.. This poem gives off a warm and fuzzy feeling, truthful and full of emotion ^_^ Good job! Excellent piece, brought back the emotions I felt from my first kiss...
~*Forsaken Child*~ -
scrumtrulescent!
this poem just feels good, for both guys and girls who have felt this before, and even for some who have never had the chance to kiss...good write! -
This was such a great poem! Theres so much truth and emotion in it! I love it! first kiss' are always the best, cause theres fear and wonder in it, its great! Great job capturing this feeling in words! keep up the writing!
~Jordie -
LOL, so ya this poem brings back memories. You did a very good job in making this personal. I like it because almost anyone can relate to it, because most have experianced a kiss. It would be cool to have another poem along the same lines that explores the concept of love as whole.
Cassidy -
WOW i remember mah first kiss it was to dis thug named travis he is soo hhott But great poem i luv it! i hope u dont mind if i print it off and put it in mah locker well if u do mind tell me i wont print it off then bye
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I remember my first kiss well. It was so many years ago; it is one that I have never told anyone about--even the girl didn't know that it was my first and still doesn't. It was wonderful just like your poem is. That kiss I will remember forever, and I think that you will remember this poem forever too.
Damon D. Brewer -
sometimes a first kiss sucks and it hurts other people, it can kill another persons soul. and soemtimes a first kiss means nothing.
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Oh yes, how I remember the first kiss, for me it was not long ago. But for me....it was the best ever and continues everyday from that first kiss til evermore. ~Bud~
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This is a wonderful piece. Very nicely written.
Anna -
very sweet
Awsome Yvonne~
loved it =)
ohh, how I am waiting for my first kiss still~
Hopefully I'll get it tonight! What better time then of all days??
Valentine's day yay!
Happy Valentine's Day to you
::muhas::
*hugs*
SunShine -
...and don't we just "know" after the first kiss... there's just something about that... the heart either flutters or not...
My first kiss was one of the most exciting experiences in my life and i was sooooo nervous... i'll never forget him or where we were or how it all came about...
Beautiful poem, nicely done... i really enjoyed this, brought back memories for me.
~ Wendy -
Ah Yvonne ... the secret is that every single kiss must feel like the "first" kiss ...
I enjoyed your poem. It carries the feeling. ;)
Thank you for reading my work.
Kindest regards. Myra
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WOW!!! you got that right, the first kiss is really something special, especially if it leads to many many more... a wonderful and creative write...excellent!!!!
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I think its wonderful! Perfect way to put those feelings into words!
Good write!
~Dria~
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Yvonne beautifully penned girl
You captured my thoughts on a first kiss with someone perfectly it is the kiss I never forget...the first one and the very last one
Beautiful work Yvonne
~~Dawn -
Oh, Wow Yvonne, this is sooooooooooooo yummy!!!
Adorable write
~~hugs~~
Karen -
woo hoo!
i really like this poem.
it's something i would never have thought of.
good job
-Tash-
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