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Your Ocean

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MAN:
I want to fall into your body
Like waves upon the sand
And, please, don't be afraid of me
But let me take your hand.

And I will show you places
That you have never been before
I want to dive into your ocean
I'm dying to explore.

-CHORUS-
I want to dive into your ocean
And unlock the door to your heart
To feel the music deep inside of us
We'll never be apart.

I want to dive into your ocean
To feel your flesh against my own
So join me in my paradise
And you'll see, you're not alone.
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WOMAN:
I want to feel you deep inside me
Like the heat that burns my core
I'm here, and I've been waiting
Just hoping for something more.

And then I can take you any place
That you long to be
I'm drowning in your ocean
And it's only you and me.

BOTH:
And it's written in the stars for all to see.

-CHORUS-

BOTH:
I'm sinking, and I'm going under
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
I'm here, lost in your ocean
I'm drowning in you, and you in me...

-CHORUS-

Author notes

*This was originally written as a duet, the love theme for a story I wrote. Another attempt at non-trashy erotica. Enjoy!
Written March 17th, 2006


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  • second-born
    November 23, 2007

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    Wow…a beautiful duet!!! I like all the vivid images your song offered…and I couldn’t wait to hear its powerful rendition…thank you for sharing your lovely write!!!


  • only1love4ever
    November 8, 2007

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    Wow, that is very talented, and it is beautiful, and ever so creative, thank you for entering and best of luck to you!!


  • Danna Hobart
    September 24, 2007
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    Thank you for entering this lovely song.


  • Andy Stephenson
    May 2, 2007

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    Pretty good.

    This looks like it would adapt well to a melody. Do you have one? It seems to be pretty good lyrics. I like it. Thanks for entering my contest.

    Andy


  • Angel-Crestfallen
    April 26, 2007
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    very nice

    this was a very nice song ... I liked it .. Thank you for the entry ... Be well


  • tinygirl8
    April 20, 2006
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    loved this

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