Witch, witch of century,
For the person I know
don't sit close to me,
and please, she will only crawl,
and, get named as a stranger,
hardly that, none of all,
nothing.
Don't judge her, hickery truth can tell story,
but, the person, next to me,
doesn't have a story,
none at all
so, you're telling me, like a friend,
but sorry, I can't respond,
for I see evil, and demon, and
If I were to tell you story,
I'd just say, well,
we don't bond!
Author notes
Hardly liking it but I'd say it describes aspects of a relationship which are from the deeper meaning. Come on really, strangers, yer everyone!
Written March 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- What you see In a person by Just Myself.
300 points, ended March 24, 2006, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i had to comment again
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i loved this poem it was so original , and the last 2 lines were a great way to end
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but sorry, I can't respond,
for I see evil, and demon, and
If I were to tell you story,
I'd just say, well,
we don't bond <<< i loved these lines
a great way to end your poem, this one almost seemed......lyrical
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cheers
muchas graci!! thanks for taking the time to review again.
Thanks for the compliment of it being lyrical.
Take care,
Leanne
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Aww, you know, when I was writing this poem, I was at school on the computer and this boy was sitting next to me blasting his mp3. So hopefully, he didn't read it else he would of thought it was about him. How are you doing?
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awsome erite
I like this one you have very unique creativity and I like that you can say the things you did It makes it so much more interesting
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