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Passionate Sunday (Haiku)

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palm sunday entrance
rides into jerusalem
wept for what will be



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Luke 19:29-44
Written March 16th, 2006

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    March 22, 2006
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    worthy effort

    sandygram, Thank you for your entry in the contest. The picture/poem combination is a nice package. Your contribution was a worthy effort in this limited focus contest. Dennis :^)


  • Turtledove
    March 16, 2006
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    Very nice indeed. well done. I love the pictoral. Glad to see that someone on AP, you and Mickie27 so far, have the spirit for such an adventure as this. You did an admirable job so good luck! Walt.


  • Sharcu silver member
    March 16, 2006
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    Woah... definately different from the other entries I read in the contest! It's a very creative haiku! Awesome work! Good luck in the contest!
    --Tim