Momentarily, I await for this trepidation
to subside...longing for that caress beyond
those wrinkled sheets
Here we lie in unison making
the word rapture just another
unseeing depth of molding
You're hands stretch across as though
they've known what to expect from this
body's reaction; beneath these hazy clouds
created from just that stroke
My soul screams out for unnatural bliss
and for a split second, this being returns
in response of our actions
Waiting once more
Tasting all sensations...
Bringing to life every nerve
to explode on contact, has somehow mingled
into the balmy sweetness as lust infuses with
hungered craving
Our bodies starve just to touch one another
for until nothing left is there to grab;
just lost amongst it all you and I lie there
catching our breaths -smiling in the darkness only
to start all over again as a repeat performance
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Written March 16th, 2006
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This is very pretty. I love the background and the pic. I saved them I liked them so much. I would love to see what you could do with one a bit more raunchy. Thanks for entering and good luck -
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erotic, sensual yet distancing. Well done.
Cheers, Mike -
this is really well written. i liked the words you used, they sound so pretty ^^ i also like how the word "rapture" is in italics. amazing job, keep up the good work. <3
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ty mommy
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EXCELLENT!!!!! :F
Oh sweetheart this is truly beautiful..... You have outdone yourself in words with this one and the elegance of this piece is seen throughout..... Bravo! Great job Poetess, great job indeed! Please continue to write and have all here in AP enjoy the wonders of your words..... Thank you very much for sharing.....
As always,
Mami -
bouncy bouncy
yeah lol only problem is that this is the first erotic poem ive written in a long time
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Rae, rauncy as usual, bouncey, bouncey.
Georges.
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