Beautiful oasis turns into desert
All wishes pour out into the sand
Emotions crashing, lost and hurt
Your cold heart I hold in my hand
One squeeze to end this nightmare
The darkest moment in our story
Death’s approaching, ready whore?
Vicious murders, in all their glory
Blood spurts, then it hits the floor
Death came, nightmare races on
Majestic landscapes, metal misery
Moans of a thousand voices in pain
Vultures, looking way too cheery
Darkness supreme, there I reign
Squeeze, you end, nightmare over
Author notes
Dunno what this is... Meh, too long without writing anything... Now I did, just came out like this. Don't think it's good, but yeah... I made a promise to someone that I'd post whatever new I'd manage to write. So yeah here it is... If you don't like it then please do not write and say so, nor do I wish you to point out ways to improve it or mistakes made writing it. It is what it is, and I'm not gonna change it.
I know it's poorly written, rhymed and in other ways composed, don't need you to tell me.
Well that's all I had to say, hope it didn't feel like a complete waste of time stopping by and reading this. Have a nice day/morning/night/whatever. ^-^
//Wayfarer
Written March 16th, 2006
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Just read this again, and I can actually tell I hadn't slept for 53 hours or so before writing this. It made sense at the time, not anymore though. At least not to me... =\ But then again, not much does when I look at it again. At least someone liked it so far, always something. ^^
Hope you're 'kay dear. I miss you too, talk soon I'd hope. Untill then, stay safe and take care. -
Robert!!!!!you posted something, and as a matter of fact, I LOVE IT!!! you are an amazing person, and i love you dearly my friend...this poem is so deep and dark, you did a good job, you should congradulate yourself. i miss you comletely, with my whole heart.
erynn
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