Violence – noticed
On the contrary.
Symbolism of ego
Unjustified.
Sliver, slice, not quite.
Ornamental uses only
Maybe?
Challenged?
Demonstration required,
Unnecessary and immoral
Yet, required.
Courage –
Persuaded into decency
Or – conscience came about.
Either way - which is more
Renouncing ego and weapon
Or an eccentric performance?
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Written March 16th, 2006
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different is what I first get from this.. I like this tho.. its very unusual to write this way and thats good...
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verying interesting...I love how its put.....it describes each word...yet puts them together in a sense of what might become better than the other...it goes together very well
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This was a very nice piece i liked it evry much
it was so creative and unusual
its very nicely wrote
all the best
love melisa
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Very interesting...very interesting indeed...Not a poem I feel that I have read before: and that is a compliment.
There are so many things which I read and think "oh not another one! Haven't I read this somewhere before?" I didn't think that when reading yours.
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