Take a look at me now,
Smiling through tears
As sodium rivers run down my face.
I look into your eyes
And you can see me
Looking back
Unlike the others
Who claim to know me so well.
And I cry
Because instead of being here with me
You're leaving
To be there with her.
And you don't understand
That my heart is beating here for you
Pounding in rhythm
With your steps as you walk away.
Author notes
He doesn't know.
Written March 16th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- My Own Kind of Love by Paradise Prisoner.
1000 points, ended November 15, 2006, 59 entries
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quite a lovely entry here! I like your visual descriptive you gave us with the sodium rivers. A great piece and I hope this isn't personal hon. If it is..
may you find healing now and the one that truly deserves YOU! Thanks for the entry in the contest and all the best to you in it 
Love & Light~
~Joy -
AW! thats so sad! I want to cry. I hate the thought of my ex being with another girl...ARGH. anyways, awesome and good luck!
~Cookie
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