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Our Love

Our love has had it's ups and downs
There were times I didn't think you'd stick around
But you're still here and I have nothing to fear
Our Love's so strong it WILL persevere.

You are my heart, my dreams, my LIFE
I am so proud to be your wife
Waking up beside you makes my heart shine
It is such a blessing to call you mine.

You are so much more than just a lover
You are ALWAYS here, there could be no other
You fill my heart
You fill my soul
Our spirits are connected
God is in control

Our destiny has always been in His hands
He hath joined us together, it was His command
Soul mates we are by His glory and grace
Together forever it is our fate.

Author notes

This is written for my wonderful husband whom I love with all my heart!!
Written March 16th, 2006

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  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you so much Donielle for your comment! Yes, I did share this with my hubby, it was one of his Valentine's Day presents lol. It took me awhile to write because I was trying to show the depth of my love for him. Thank you so much for understanding! Take care, ~Angel~

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you so much damaged-rose for the comment! And such a nice one! Take care, ~Angel~

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you Josephine! Yes, love is unconditional! No matter what we have been through I still love my hubby with everything I have in me and I thank God everyday for blessing me with him even though you drives me nuts lol. Thanks again for the comment! ~Angel~

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you. Don't know where the backround came from lol! I think I picked it cause it's like a worl wind lol like life and marriage! Take care and thanks again for the comment.

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you so much PrabhuDayal! Your comment is appreciated! Take care and God bless. ~Angel~

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thanks Shellzz! Your comment is so greatly appreciated! I sometimes like the darker poetry myself lol but I love the light and fluffy stuff better. I have so much love in my heart lol it's easier to share! Thanks again for the comment and give your hubby lots of love I am sure he deserves it EVEN if he drives you nuts like mine does me lol. Take care, ~Angel~

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you Viyanna! I believe that there is someone out there for everyone! You will one day find your soul mate, the person that completes you and makes you happy! Best of luck to you and thanks again for the comment.

  • Butterfly Rain
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you so much intanglio for your comment. Yes marriage is worth it if you truly love the person with everything you have. It feels good too lol! Thanks again.


  • Donielle21
    March 18, 2006
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    This is beautifully written. It shows the joy and happiness that you feel for having your man at your side. I hope that you share this with him because I know that it will bring more joy to his heart to know that you love him unconditionally.


  • Xxpain-is-beutyxX
    March 18, 2006
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    OMG that is so awesome!!! keep it up!!!!!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 18, 2006
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    A most wonderfully penned write, love is unconditional and You have shown this through Your write Josephine.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 18, 2006
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    Interesting background you have used for this poem - sentiments well expressed in these lines, so easy to read and understand. Enjoyed the read.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 18, 2006
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    You are so much more than just a lover
    You are ALWAYS here, there could be no other
    You fill my heart
    You fill my soul
    Our spirits are connected
    God is in control

    my salute to your depth and the true love for your lover ....God bless you both...amen


  • LovesWithTheBreeze
    March 18, 2006
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    Aww this was just so beautiful. I am so used to seeing darker and more depressed poetry (which dont get me wrong, I love) but its nice to click on something and get that feeling of "aww" Makes me want to love my hubby more lol. Great job on this one hun....
    Shellzz


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 18, 2006
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    Our destiny has always been in His hands
    He hath joined us together, it was His command
    Soul mates we are by His glory and grace
    Together forever it is our fate.

    this is really great. so very sweet and it gives me hope that maybe i will not always be alone. viyanna r langager


  • intanglio2ring
    March 18, 2006
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    Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I wish we could all share with you the bliss that should come with marriage. You send out a beacon of hope that it was worth the try.

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