Stimulating, calming, soothing,
My hands to the glass,
I am lost in my water imagination.
My hands to the glass,
I am lost in my water imagination.
Author notes
Written March 16th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Pixiku... About a painting... by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended March 18, 2006, 27 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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beautiful! if we had a fish tank my cat would have already eaten the fish. lol. when i was little we used to have a fish and i would watch it nearly all day. love the poem!
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Ooh... you did such a great job here!! I really liked this.. beautiful in its simplicity.. You did such a great job with the prompt... Congrats on the Silver too.. Great write..
Maeve
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simple yet amazing Well written~
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Ohhh, this is wonderfully done. It's easy to see how you earned a trophy for this one
Yes...this I like alot
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excellent
Oh I love this
My girlfriend kids got their mom a 33 gallon aquarium for Christmas just been there looking at all her new fish....LOL..
I have been so sick....and just yesterday and today began to feel better
Congrats on the Silver Trophy sweetie....
I just posted a new one hope you pop over and give it a read..my first vinaelle..I hope I did alright...
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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excellent~
Beautiful
I have yet to do one of the Pixiku....
Congrats on the trophy
Can see why you got it....
I just posted a new one too do drop by when ya can
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Excellent
Shey, this write is so beautifully put together.
I truly enjoyed reading this one.
I hope to read more very soon my dear friend.
Love ya.
Keep up with the great work.
*S* Cynthia
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I love the last line in this simple poem. rEal nice.
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A calm and soothing take on the prompt. Well deserved trophy. Loved it.
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Awww. Very cute and imaginative. I love the imagery you have captured in your words. Well done.
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excellent~
I have never done one of these forms before...One day will have to try looks like fun....and I can see why yours got silver....indeed aquariums are fun soothing and very calming
Love the pic btw...too cute...
Congrats on the silver trophy
Most excellent
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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What a wonderful piece you have here. Pixiku, huh? Well, I have no idea how to write one, but I sure can tell that you know how! A brilliant piece...and you gave the picture your own touch and made it yours. Fantastic job.
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Congratulations on the silver.
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smooth
as glass. I glided across it like ice, wish there had been more!
Smile,
Judy
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OMG! This is brillant to say the very least. There is so few words, yet they say sooooo much. The "my water imagination" that can mean sooo many things. WEll written. I am so glad to see you grabbed the silver. "You deserved a win here
Mel
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Awwwwwww omg I love this it's totally wonderful! Way to go on your silver. You gave me a smile when I read this I mean wow
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I would have given this gold! This is a very beautiful write! Excellent job!
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I am so happy you won silver for this one! My only regret is that I didn't comment before the contest was over! Ah well
I'm glad the judges saw the potential and immense talent like I have ... it reminds me of the time I was a child and did that many times at the doctor's office... ah, I miss those days
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Lovely. I had never heard of Pixiku. The picture goes perfectly with your piece. Very nice!
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Cute picture. Makes me wanna be that little again. You know..when I was that easily entertained and my imagination would take me to so many fun places when I simply had a fish tank to look at
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I see whay this has won 3 silvers Wow the imagery I got lost there for a minute really a grand write Love that picture its so real life...
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captivating!
captivating, engrossing, consuming
cat and girl drawn in
sharing a mental feast of adventure!
Much love dear one!
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i teach kindergarten. wonderful and powerful image you painted here. the word that stood out to me was imagination. with a child's imagination, anything can come true. congrats on the trophy.
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I do love this form you have used here, the picture is so cute and the poem and pic go together very well. Congrats on winning silver with this awesome write.
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This is a wonderful pixiku!! I remember that picture, it goes so well with the title and the write. I am glad it took silver, congratulations!!
Sam
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This is priceless. I love how the mind can flow with these words. I can easily see the image it is about, but I can also fathom so many scenes in my head with this. This is superb!
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This so deserved the silver chalice, a very well scripted account of the wondrous things beheld in the eyes of children, and the way they look in awe at them wanting to learn all they can by simply watching. Great piece.
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lovely trophy winner
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Rarely have I felt such deep expression in so few words. In my book it deserved at least the silver trophy. Well done
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ah, this brings back fond memories to see this. I remember this is one of the first contests I wrote something in for butterfly. Your poem is a good metaphor for the computer age.
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Congratulations on your win! Looks like this was just what she was looking for
vj
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A Gurggling experience comes to mind with this well inscripted piece......love the image of imaginations running wild with such innocence......atlantis comes to my mind...
Hugs
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I really liked how you used the word "you" it makes the painting real instead of abstract. Great last line too ~ Very clever write. Thank you for your entry... x
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