And please don’t leave me for Johnny
And that’s not funny.
And boys come and go, you know?
And friendships don’t-aren’t supposed to go…
And that’s what other so-called friends did to me
And they were… happy.
And my friend Mary met Johnny
And began to call him Honey.
And we stopped being friends
And she had her fun with their boyfriend
And said, "sorry you feel that way"
and forgot me. I didn’t stay.
And I didn’t complain. They “love” each other. I have ears
And the laughter and scorn of me not dating.
And split me down the seams. I wish I could be crying
And the tears don’t flow Raw emotion- makes it so i CAN’T
And that was that. My best friend… left me.
And she became the "Great Divide"
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Written March 16th, 2006
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makes no sense badly put!
this is like really really really confusing...many flaws...you really need to fix this..i don't even know if i can finish that poem..i don't like it...i mean it's a good write and everything just the way everything is put together it doesn't fit. it's confusing...makes no sense to me. you shouldn't mess with it like that. i've saw things like that before..but that made sense...it explained the line...not added more to it..you're is the poem...ugh... -
OK-in your L4 it says the exact same thing..I know You are reading this like what!! But it really does..But I am only one person so??and L15...please please forgive me HOw can dry tears fall?? I'm sorry I said that, but I really had to ask.. Don't get me wrong.. I make mistakes, and write some really quarky stuff myself, and I am noone to tell you how wrong this is, but I like the way you wrote this it was very original!! Just what was asked for, and you did it with a very compelling write, but maybe with a few lil flaws, but so much Great GOOD luck to you.
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Well Done!
WELL DONE! Not an easy style to express yourself with, but you pulled it off nicely, thanks for entering, and keep on penning on!
-Timothy~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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