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I Lost



                   I didn’t think of you yesterday  
                   And the pain in worse today 

                   I am not ready to day goodbye 
                   Not ready to give up 
                   I lost believe and hope 

                   I lost you   

                    


                                      Why can’t you just turn around, 
                   turn back time and kiss me once more 

                   Make me cry velvet tears 
                   and I will be you demise 
                   I am that pain to you heart. 
                   The burden on your shoulders 


                   Still anger rises up 
                   Feelings I never had before. 
                   I never knew you had. 


                   But in that moment of clarity 
                   I lost my vision. 
                   You won yourself back. 
                   and took the sun 

                   Take me with you 
                   to where ever you want to go 
                   I will be quiet 
                   and admire 

                   Love and Lost 
                   the difference is small 
                   but still bigger 
                   than once and one. 

                   Hold me once more 
                   Wrap me in your arms 
                   make us feel like one   


                                                         and love.   



                                                        

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Written February 4th, 2006

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  • blondone
    April 17, 2006
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    such a sad poem but so well written great imagery love the choice of words and the lines and words flow with ease such a sad poem but so well written ....


  • Always Deena
    March 22, 2006
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    Awe honey I am so sorry I have been slacking...are you alright? I love you.
    Deena