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rolling emotions

 

I need to write

 

I need the emotions

 

To flow out from my fingers

 

Onto this page

 

I need my heart to stop hurting

 

I need out of this phase

 

My insides are screaming

 

The pain is searing

 

The lungs are tight

 

My tears are huge

 

Unfailingly falling

 

My cheeks are wet

 

The taste in my mouth is salty

 

I just need to be okay

 

I need to let go of him

 

He needs to move on

 

He can’t call and say

 

I love you more than anything

 

Those 6 words tear into me

 

They rip my heart out of my chest

 

It’s like I’ve run out of oxygen

 

I can’t breathe

 

I can’t relax

 

I need him to let go of me

 

He’s holding me back

 

I need to be okay

 

I’m wiping my tears

 

I’m taking a deep breath

 

I can make it through this

 

Through anything.

 

I’m okay.

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Written March 15th, 2006

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  • MelodyzOFzRain
    September 3, 2006
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    This is really raw- just like your emotions. I feel ya.
    Elaine

  • Intangible Sanity
    March 16, 2006
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    wow....you can really feel the emotion
    just wow
    i love this

    He can’t call and say
    I love you more than anything
    Those 6 words tear into me
    They rip my heart out of my chest

    you are amazing
    <3
    Sarah