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Be a Reaper

Be a reaper, and take my soul.
Be the reaper, I shall live no more.
Be the reaper, kill me... please.
Be the reaper, I don't want to live anymore.

(Why)
reason 1

come on reaper
They all ignore.
They all hate me.
No one likes me.

reason 2

I am nothing to the world.
I am nothing to my friends.
Come on Reaper.
I am nothing at all!

reason 3

I am not worth a penny.
I am not worth half a dime.
I am too weird for the street.
I am not weird enough for school.

So come Mr. Reaper kill me please.
So proceed with your job of death.
"No it is not your time" says Reaper.
Later I say I don't want to die anymore.

Author notes

I used to hate my self now i dont.
Written March 15th, 2006

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  • God is my reality
    September 23, 2007

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    Wow. THis is just wow. I'm so glad that you love yourself now. This is just...WOW... I am speechless. Good luck in the contest


  • March 21, 2006
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    From Clidney
    Thats the spirit! keep that up, homie. i love ya poem

  • Homicidal Maniac
    March 15, 2006
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    Dark-ish

    Ooooh I love it. So dark-ish.

    They all hate me.
    No one likes me.

    ^_^ That part reminds me very much of how I feel, Great job Nora! Keep it up.