Sleeping
Deeply
Wondering
Weeping.
Will you save me?
Will you wake me?
Will I be here forever?
Or will you set me free?
Crying
Reaching
Screaming
Dying.
Can't you hear my scream?
I'm falling apart!
Wake me up!
Ripping at the seam.
Falling
Fading
Leaving
Calling.
I guess nobody cares.
And I guess that's why they say,
That even sleeping beauty
Has her nightmares.
Author notes
i'll make you up so beautiful', Shadows Fall.
A contest entry
- Lovely Eternities Are For FairyTale Princesses.♥ by WishMeAway--x.
750 points, ended October 12, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Misery Loves Company by Danna Hobart.
375 points, ended October 16, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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alot of questions.
shit. i know that one. fun isnt it?
falling is never good.
and yes someone cares.
dont believe for a minute that someone doesnt.
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Very Nice
Very critical. I really like this poem. It's a very deep look into your own psyche. Or you are very good at seeming to be overcome with angst. It was very well written and could do fairly well in my contest. I need you to follow the rules, though.
9) Titles can be no shorter than five syllables.
I really would like this in my contest. I'd consider revising the title of the piece. -
great
I Love it! I know its sad but I love it al the same becasue its a dream and the like to influence me! Good luck! -
wonderful twist at the end .. enjoyed muchly .. thanks so much for entering and I wish you the best of luck in the contest ... keep the ink flowing
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