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Rain Storm


The rain falls down
Sounds of roaring lions

Loud & Hard
Then the soft pit pat

The thunder booms
And shakes the walls

Loud & Shaking
Then soft stillness

The lightning flashes
And lights up the room

Loud & Bright
Then soft and dark

Author notes

I wrote this during a rain storm...and this is how my life feels right now...I hope you enjoy...
Written March 15th, 2006

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  • sufficated
    May 10, 2006
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    ooo its like a scarry story,and shakes the walls i like it.it sends chills up my spine!!!
    -love-autmn

  • DracosLilly
    March 31, 2006
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    last night I read all 34 of your poems you posted. your a great a poet I look forward to reading some more of your works