Come back to me silent darkness of the night,
so we may hide from the hypocritical scornful light.
Because it always likes to portray unfairness in the day,
and this is not the way we want to live anyway.
No one has to die,
inside the truth of a lie.
So neither should we sway,
inside winds of a misguided ray.
Now I ask of you, only one thing to do,
take my hand and guide me with you.
So together may we lay,
my soul into the hands of the void today.
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Written March 15th, 2006
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This was very pretty i liked it very much
love melisa xox -
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Feel the void around you,
And in yielding to its sway,
Shut out the brightness and its betrayal,
Forever in darkness stay.
My talon fingers will close on you,
For I am the Queen of the Darkened:
Your ears respond only to my sound -
Your true insides have hearkened.
I'll drag you where it's safe and damp,
Where the light shall never see...
Ensconced by the grips that muffle reality,
You'll be kept here close to me.
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Pardon me, I was just inspired to write that after reading
I guess that's all to be said.
Edymion.
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very nice portrayal of emotions. I've also yearned for the darkness in times where I have wanted to hide or to die. Once I found the light though, there is no going back. I hope you find your light soon. In the meantime, keep writing. It's good to express your soul.
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It seems sorta sad.
And it also seems like alot of people would relate to it.
The silent darkness of night isn't overused. It's a fantastic way to describe a situation.
Especially one such as the silent darkness of night.
And everyone puts there own unique meaning itno it with their poem anyway.
I love this poem.
Keep writing, you're great
Mel
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This is very nice. Nothing personal but the silent darkness of night is kinda overused. Otherwise very nice,if it is sad.
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This is somehow sad dear friend,but it's a good piece.
Shahrzad
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