Here I am again
Roaming through these lonely streets
My feet hit the ground
Creating a constant beat
As soothing rain drums all around me
Silver droplets dust the street
The pavement shining with
A sheet of sorrow and beauty
Beads of rain in the light of street lamps
Sparkle like your smile
A crash of thunder
Shatters the silence within me
I look up at the tempestuous sky
Twisting and churning
Reminding me of your clouded eyes
Completely drenched
For a moment, feeling so pure and free
As the water temporarily strips away my faults
And the pain that so often laces my smiles
Fades, but you will never be washed away
I go inside
And leave a trail of secrets behind
I walk to the window
And watch the drops of moisture
Chase each other across the pane
A scattered reflection of my face
Brings unwanted recollections
Memories of you flood my mind
And creates an apparition of you
That haunts me by my side
I wait as the storm
Rages on, and gradually
Weakens and becomes more distant
It ebbs away so slowly
Like time here without you
Author notes
Written March 15th, 2006
*Option 3 & 8
A contest entry
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Not Bad At All
I believe that you are the only one that used more than one option, although some I think could have as well. I liked this poem. I think you did a good job and I thank you for entering it in my contest. Good luck!

