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Spinning !

In
a moment
I saw you smile
and felt your touch

It's a beautiful day
when I see you smiling
like the sunshine to array
the hearts of those around you

bring your sweet bliss into the place
which lies in wait to fast surrender for
the moment’s kiss by your mind’s caring
sewn first in your soul where love resides

and how do you receive your passion when
it’s you who need a ration feeling goodness touch
upon the same desire to taste the place where passion
yearns for that same kiss to linger like a song from heaven?

screams disappear and in their place there reemerge the music
from a chant of never-ending memories of sacred words unspoken
left by holiest embrace upon the sweet delight of puckered sensual lips
moving slowly barely feeling feather-touch caress to fast undress

my inhibitions melting, as the fire builds to summit’s peak
resistance fades as accolades from angels wings announce
your beauty to find my senses have been blitzed beyond
all hope to leave your midst and so steadfast I remain

displaying courage to face dismay, arranging words
of sweetness treasured, like a kiss upon your nape;
between each line thus palpitates appreciation
far beyond where there’s no measure

more than brain is coursing flames
by aphrodisiac I can’t resist
you’ve left me senseless
without defenses ...

waiting for your
kissed caress
upon my
lips

Michael Maldonado
Please visit ~>  TheLatinPoet.com

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Written April 28th, 2003

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  • d a f f o d i l
    April 13, 2006
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    This was a beautifukl write Michael! The form of this was immaculate and ran so well! Your writeas are so full of depth..i admore that!

    Fern