Lets start with the obvious
Blonde hair, blue eyes,
Shes a little short,
but her personality makes up for her size
She loves everyone,
She’s one of the nicest people I know
Quite possibly in the world,
But sometimes she doesn’t let her emotions show
She’s my shoulder to cry on,
My favorite person to look to for advice
She doesn’t always have the answers
but she’ll try anything once or twice
She’s been looking around for love
I guess in all the wrong places
There’s been many cute boys
But in the end, they’re all just pretty faces
She’s way to smart for her own good
Honors classes and a 4.0.
Such an over achiever
But she couldn’t live with herself if it wasn’t so
Sometimes I think she just wants to let go of herself
Shake the reputation as the daughter of a teacher
But she always finds her head,
Her good sense is one of her best features
She likes to play volleyball
Even if she was stuck on the bench this year
Her whole heart was in it
She barely let out a tear
She enjoys watching hockey
And football games in Fresno
Whether it’s the Bulldogs or Falcons
She’s ready to go
Her favorite place is Tuolumne Medows
Its her escape from life
A quitet beautiful second home
It’s calm there, shes able to let go of her strife
She’s one of my best friends
Which is not a label,
It’s a promise.
Live life without her? I wouldn’t be able.
Author notes
poetry club meeting tomorrow,
had to write an into poem about ourselves,
my friend and i decided to write about eachother instead
not my best work,
help needed. thanks.
<3
Written March 14th, 2006
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simple but with meaning. real and not too fluffy with the rhyming. all in all, good job with writing this. enjoyed the read.
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A tribute to a friend is a most noble use of poetry. Your descriptions and comments are very clear and concise. I'll be catching future works of yours as you have a very reader friendly style.
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Hey, this sounds like me 40 years ago. LOL Enjoyed this easy to read and understand poem. Sentiments well expressed in these lines.
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This is a nice tribute to a friend. It could use a little help with the flow. So she's a real blue eyed 'smart' blonde. That's a good thing. I never really bought into the dumb blonde thing, anyway.
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WOW ... i wish that i had a great friend like that!
this was really written from the heart!!
great stuff!!
B
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nice
aw..what a lovely piece..sounds like a really great friend to have.obviously very personal and it's very well written.well done.regards floorboards
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