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temporary confession

music plays loudly
engulfing my thoughts
I cannot think about this lightly
can a soul be bought?

playing the game
without ever learning the rules
thought nothing could happen
drinking Tequila and acting like fools

we were wrong....


driving down the highway
at eighty miles an hour
thunder roared in lightning flash speed
while we laughed in an alcoholic glee
we became air-borne soaring high

we were invincible...you and me

the car came out of nowhere
driving slow and carefully
we thought it would be fun
to scare them ~ see how fast their car could run
bright lights burning, we swerved just a bit
thunder roared and the sky was filled with zee's

just before the big fiery crash


as we side-swiped the drivers door
the car flew through the rail
down the embankment we were all going to Hell
erupting into flames
as we traveled air-borne through the teardrops of rain
the last thing I knew was that Tequila burns fast
the bottle erupted as I screamed with pain


five people killed that stormy night
in an unfortunate collision due to the rain
no charges were brought
it was an accident


that is what the state troopers would say
that is what they thought


but I know the truth
I am the only one that lived
and the river of truth
runs deep and still

my life ended that night ~~

I am left paralyzed for life
would it serve a purpose
to confess
or am I repenting for my crime?
paying my just and life-long due
one long hour at a time


music plays loudly
engulfing my thoughts
I cannot think about this lightly
can a soul be bought?

I'll have another glass of Tequila
and eat the worm my friends
and I will stay air-borne till the very end




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Written March 14th, 2006

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  • deathbyfrootloopsxx
    March 16, 2006
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    The contest was TITLED "anything that doesn't rhyme".

    It's a beautiful poem, but PLEASE! read the TITLE at least before you post a poem!


  • Dygurl
    March 14, 2006
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    wow very strong write. Very sad and hits hard. awsome write. good luck in the contest.

  • magoink03
    March 14, 2006
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    this made me cry no lie. im a very emotional person but this was so powerful and just...i dont no! i like very much and im sorry. good rite keep it up!