I stand before;
In the midst of evenings downpour,
As the moon and stars fade between grey,
I lay on ground -
Listening to the roaring thunder,
Breathing in gentle air -
Wiping away tears of mine that cannot be seen.
Alone I feel -
I’m about to give up,
For I cannot find the true meaning of;
~ Love ~
Once I screamed for more;
For I thought my heart was found and taken,
Yet, come to find; its end shattered -
However, now
There’s you and I.
As I lie next to you; it’s my greatest dream come true
When you hold me, my worries are released from the world,
And without you, I would not survive.
This feeling I have for you; words cannot explain,
One word;
Love,
Does not describe how much more lies inside.
When your lips are against mine;
Passionately tasting my tongue;
My spirit becomes weak and empty.
When you touch me, my body becomes filled of chills;
You’re delicate touch; oh so cherished;
I’ve found myself the happiest with you;
If only I knew your feelings were the same.
On my knees I’ll pray, Please God;
Let these feelings be true for us two.
Sending tears with this prayer,
I’m holding onto my faith,
For you to be my someone.
However, things still need time.
As seasons change,
Pictures begin to fade,
Frowns are cried,
Smiles are laughed,
There’s still you and I -
For someday soon.
Yet; amongst my dream -
- Awakened again -
Lying in moist grass -
Raindrops sprinkle -
Ending last nights thunder rain, in morning golden haze
As my tears are now seen, down my blemished skin,
Opening one more sunrise in pain;
From my desire of you and I to become; us.
Author notes
Yaay! I finally got out a new poem! lol
Written March 14th, 2006
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the flow is amazing. no stanzas is hard to pull off but you did it well. good luck!
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Wonderful
wow josh thats really good..i love how you put our own experience in your poems..good job -
Wonderful1 baby!
I am confused...was this the one you read to me? I like this it was very good. Is it about us? Because you read this one to me and said that it wasnt and not to take it into offence because it wasnt, well then what is it about? Explain it to me, bc I think that it is good. Like you miss me but you are doubting us and then you finally realize that it will be okay, and we are okay. Now that is what you had been feeling (but not anymore since it is 100% that I will be up there with you in 66 days!) I love you so much and I can not wait until the day that we get married. I love you so much Joshua!! I hope that you have a great day and I will talk to you when I get home since you are not on here. I love you. And exlpain this poem and the other to me. You didnt tellme about the other one. That must of been what you were talking about last nite "the one before this" you never read it to me. I gotta go I'mma print off a few of your poems to put in my book. I love you baby! Have a great day! ::kisses and huggs::
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