And as the sun sets a new day is fashioned
Birthed through night’s season, in the deepest dark.
Effervescent Stars are splashed across the sky
Crickets sing love’s song, the moon now hangs high.
It’s peaceful and so quiet
Night’s creatures have come forth
As others settle down
For a night of rest.
The stars now brightly shimmer, the North star’s up above
The Big Dipper tilts aside, spilling out it’s love.
And as a bulbous cloud drowns out the moon
Silence explodes…..
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Written March 14th, 2006
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This is quite a change of pace - and I feel all soothed and dreamy now. Great word use and descriptions. You've created the mood well.
Paul -
It means sparkling, lively! Thank so much for reading this and for commenting!
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Beautifully written. I loved the flow and everything. It's very peaceful, and I really liked that. What does effervescent mean, though?
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