balmy Spring teaser
blue sky, sixty degrees
tomorrow snow
Author notes
spring fever, winter leaver
Written March 13th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Seasonal " Haiku's" by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended October 16, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That sounds like Florida weather... without the snow. You can be in shorts and a T-shirt one day, and the next day not be able to dress warm enough.
I like this because it holds true to how unpredictible the weather can be. Awesome write!
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Thought for a moment I was watching our local weather channel. very nice with a little humour added.
Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest.
ED.
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Simply Superb!
Superb...just like a typical weather bulletin...including the wry humour!...my kind of write! -
I liked this one! Hope to read more of your poems.... Just starting to get inot haiku etc... love to learn more about the other forms too.
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excellent! this was so beautiful and a bit humerous! Awesome write!
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looks similar to the routine weather report ...
interesting write ... with an amusing touch -
Hi Haiku-bless-you... and so true. Excellent form. Beautiful flow. We had a day or two like that here in New York. Well crafted and a much enjoyed read. Shelley
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