Love is more than a phrase or saying.
love could be an action.
Love is a wonderful feeling.
Love is also an horrible strong hurtful feeling.
When your gone i cry.
when your here i feel happiness
when i see your face i smile and reach for your hands.
when your gone i smell your scent.
opening my eyes slightly wandering if it's you im hearing?
wandering if i will wake up or ever see you again.
Rumors start, shit starts happening.
no one beleives me anymore.
im no longer Jess, but a robot under everyones control.
no one asks me my opions.
No one cares!
so i play my music loud and scream until my throat is sore.
Cry unflowing rivers and cut the deepest with the dullest knive.
No longer Jess, only a robot under everyones control.
Author notes
thanks for reading i hope you enjoy it's been a while trying to warm back up. thanks.
Jess~
Written March 13th, 2006
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i like the imagery. wonderful piece. please continue to write.
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great
deep but try to find yourself and let them go. You have great passion. Loved it!!! -
thats so deep and powerful. theres so much anger and resentment in the poem and its expressed so well. keep writing im glad ur doin it agen.
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I'm glad you're back writing, so am I!!!well posting stuff anyways, very very sharp twist in tone, I was very surprised at the way it all ended I thought it was a Love poem, but quite a different ending, good metaphor Jess, can't wait to read your next posts 
Ruth
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bleh.....love was thought up by women, who are evil, so yeah. *poke* TTYL
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this was awesome and love SUCKS i hate it... b/c every time i fall into it i get hurt so i choose to not let that happen again but well done and i hope things are going good!
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love all your work
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