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Love Lays Bleeding


Two Broken Hearts lay bleeding in the frozen snow
Their owners both uncertain which way now to go
I know I held both our futures in the palm of my hand
The future has crumbled, and disappears like grains of sand

What fickle people we are, we tell ourselves we’re in love
And the person that you’re in love with, no one can rise above
But should they decide to move on and leave you
They will hurt you just as bad as your enemies would do

If by loving you and not letting go was a cruel thing to do
A selfish crime, but an act of love, what else could I do
It feels now I have been locked up, so throw away the key
The jury found me guilty; it remains for you to punish me

What is the sentence for loving a person for too long?
But not give the commitment you so  patiently waited for
Will I have to spend a lifetime  wandering  in solitude?
Forever wondering  what life may have held in store

Author notes


Written March 13th, 2006

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  • eternalsol
    October 29
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    wow i can relate i do feel this way thanx for entering
    my contest


  • live in love
    October 9, 2007
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    thanks you for enterng great job good luck

    lil

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your most profound entry, Josephine