Orchid you wave in the wind.
Yet you continue to fantasize.
Bristle against my skin.
Lift my spirit,
Brighten my life.
Sing me a song,
Tell me a story.
You delicate Orchid
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Written March 13th, 2006
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Wonderful!!!!
What a lovely poem, full of delicate imagery.
You capture the moment perfectly!
I also love your AP name 'Lorien'. Are you a Lord of the Rings fan? If so, you might like to check out 'Undomiel', on my page.
Thank you for sharing this lovely write.
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I am a fan ,but my username actually comes from my middle name which is Lorien.
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THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
I know for me all flowers help me to feel happy and free.
Your description is so tender and sweet. 
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so much said in such a small piece wonderful imagery and wonderful wording. very preciese short sweet and to the point amazing.
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Wonderful and clear dear.
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This is a very lovely pooem..
very short, sweet and beautiful!!
I love your poetry Lorien
just a thingy "continue fantasize" should be "continue TO fantasize"
Keep on writing
Nooni
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short...but beautiful. sweet. awesome job. i like this... -unleash the bats
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great
i really like this. it is simplicity at its best. -
l like your work
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