Unblemished in your
Perfect hunger
You leap to bed,
Intent upon
My carnal soul,
Turn towards the wall...
And fall...
Asleep.
The spirit
was eager
But the flesh
passed out.
Author notes
Anyone with a lover, both of you working or going to school or both, or those like me getting on in years, has moments like this. Strangely, it is this kind of moment more than moments of superhuman marathon intercourse that recall to my mind the true depths of my tenderest loves.
Written March 13th, 2006
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passing out is the best thing in the whole entire world even better than love and lust but that is just me keep doing well
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Hi, at least you did not have a headache,lol, very funny, the mind is willing but the flesh is weak after a 14 hour day, all the best, hugs Di
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lol.
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You have no idea how 'spot on' this poem is - happens quite a lot in this household at the moment. I'm just going to read it to my husband ....
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Oh I can so relate to this. We both work, have four kids... we definately have these moments... LOL.
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LOL! I can relate to this! Thanks for sharing it.
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i really like this, very sweet. i think everyone can relate
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LMAO...we've all been here...excellent job my friend. Keep up the great work...Many blessings to you.
Terrie
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