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Death

Why does death have to be so sad.
When u die you have a choice.
You can go to heaven or you can go to hell.
It's your choice. Why does it have to be this way.
Death is scary though and you can take your on how you want to spend eternity

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Written September 20th, 2004

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  • wings of an angel
    March 15, 2006
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    Very nice poem, well put, and beautifully penned


  • NickN
    March 13, 2006
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    "Death is scary though and you can take your on how you want to spend eternity" -- Not exactly sure I understand this last sentence, but I do get the overall mood of your piece. Death is sad, but mostly for those who are left to walk the Earth, filled with only memories of the one that they had lost. I never thought of the person dying as being sad, unless they go to Hell, in which case I'd be a little sad too... Good write, I award you my last applaud of the day!