T.H. White said; "perhaps we all give the best of our hearts uncritically…to those who hardly think about us in return."
I died a little when you said
you never meant those words;
"I love you"
should not be said by those
who have no heart.
I was a fool to think
you could ever care about me,
yet a part of me still is with you.
My world came crumbling down
when I saw you with her;
you promised me forever
and I just wanted to love you.
I was going to wait for you,
but I can not spend forever waiting
on someone who is not ready to open their heart,
yet a part of me is still with you.
They say you're happy now,
that you and her are in love
and I wish you two the best.
I can not fall in love with anyone else
because you still have my heart,
even after everything you did;
teaching me not to trust anyone,
yet a part of me is still with you.
Just give me back everything,
all the hugs, all the "I love you"s,
all the memories, and
everything not yet discovered,
most importantly,
give me back my heart;
bruised and broken,
just give it back.
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Written March 13th, 2006
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beautiful
this is beautiful, and thankx for commenting on my piece 'Chapter Book", this was so great, i luved it!
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Keni ♥
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I LOVE YOU STEPH *hugs*
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This is such a good write her girl!! SCREW that stupid boy all he ever did to!! And that boy that screwed me over, Joseph...errrrr! Love sucks majorly dont it? And guys suck too! I love the last two or three lines cause they sum the whole poem togehter and its perfect! Don't change anything at all cause its perfect!! Good capture of your emotion and all you ever felt for him and what you want ever get back from him. LOVE YA GIRL!! Keep your head up, brighter days are soon to come!!
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this is so good! so full of pain and sadness and just full of emotion in general. i can sort of relate to parts of it, but not the entire thing.
i am sorry this has happened to you, but you are obviously a good person that loves this guy very much because you want him to be happy, even if it hurts you. it takes a lot to do that.
i hope you get your heart back and find someway to mend it.
good luck in the future, and thanks for sharing this piece with us
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Its pretty good, though i dont really like the first stanza. You really capture brokenhearted-ness.
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one of the best poems i have ever read...ever
wow, are you okay?i think i sort of know how you feel at the moment.i really like this poem becuase i think i can sort of relate to it, although it is a personal thing i think that many people will be able to understand.my girlfriend is not happy with being with me at the moment and i think i might have the same feelings that you are having right now...pretty soon. anyways great poem must read more of your work
love
greg
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damn that was awesome, that was like so crazy, you should write more!
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