My chest tightens with the pain.
I think I am dieing.
You always tell me to never give up hope,
but how could I not with our world slowly slipping.
You are my wonderful angel of the night.
I love you till the end of the world and beyond.
Please don't leave me.
You create the music in my life.
I want to be near you forever.
I don't know how to deal but I won't give up.
I will fight for you with my dieing breath.
I won't let them take you.
I may want to die and I might from the pain,
but I won't lose you.
I can't.
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Written March 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Random by stillinnirvana.
300 points, ended March 25, 2006, 30 entries
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Ohh that is so sweet. Fight for your love, i know I have for mine.....even though i didn't win. though i never gave up and never will. nice write.
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YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! JUST WHAT IM LOOKING FOR!!! You're amasing, you know that? It's like you knew our relationship in person. I even called her my angel and she always tells me to never give up hope, even though its slipping away so!!! I won't lose her, I won't let this other guy take her away from me forever... I'll have her back, even if I must wait all my life. I.. I can't... be all alone again........
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