Sugared red fishes passes over thy rosy lips and I must turn away
A rose for each cheek as the butterflies in my stomach call to escape
Sweet addiction to words as you sing with an angel's voice
Sipping the nectar called love from your eyes like two stars
A flute choruses in the background as the fantasies of a perfect world dance across my mind and out through the pen in my hand
The flowy cursive caresses the paper like a lover with words of passion
The image of you forever happy, forever being wise without times limit
Through this deluge of life, there is a dove in the eye
Your white wings, thy angel of sweet love dancing alone
Such ethereal clothes sewn from the moon beams
and constellations in the stars vast sky
Immortal being of beauty, of soft lunar features
Forever blessed to touch your soft lips with only a finger tip
To trace the outlines of your face with the rain drops that cling like ice
to the corners of my own pain filled eyes
Fragile china doll, lay her close in my arms
The fire within the locked soul erupts forward in a fiery storm
Consuming us both in the ecstasy of the passion in our screams
One simple kiss of the angel who captured my soul
Author notes
10th. write about love in general.
Written March 12th, 2006
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Discriptive and sweet, beautiful write.
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thank you, I wrote it for someone a long time ago
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Very beautifully and exceptionally written piece. I love it! Thanks a lot for entering, and best of luck!
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A very beautiful write - I really enjoyed this one. Well done and good luck to you in my contest.
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As I said previously this was a very beautiful poem. I kept coming back to it over and over through judging because it really made a lasting mark in my mind. I'm sorry I didn't have more than 25points to give for the honorable mention but I did want to show some appreciation. Great job and thanks again.
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This is beautiful and I loved it! Thank you for your entry to my contest and good luck!
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The imagery is beautiful and really draws you into the poem. Love it.
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Wow. Good images. Great word choice. You are a very good artist with your words.
Great write and good luck.
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This was a very touching and almost seeming personal piece. I loved it. Keep up the good work.
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This is the part where I am supposed to write an objective critique containing constructive criticism and all that jazz. I can't though. This is the perfect poem. I love it!
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Beautiful poem.
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