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Fairy Goddess

Fairy Goddess

Moonlit shadows stir beyond the bayou
Mystic music whispers upon the breeze
Cat of nine tails say come hither to me
Enticing fragrance of nectar from bees

This land of milk and honey for lovers
Your own never-land hidden far away

Become the Goddess of the fairies
For once you enter forever you stay

Moss covered trees shimmer in twilight
Hollow cypress, these fairies call home
Unseen and forgotten through the ages
Deep into the swamp they silently roam

Spreading pixie dust for all young lovers
An irresistible force far and wide
Heavenly sparkles upon moonbeams
Tthis hypnotic power you can not hide

My longing to follow overcomes me
All senses fill up with love and desire
Mesmerised by the dust of the fairies
Lost in never-land deep within the mire

I shall remain their Goddess till I die
Then a wee fairy I shall become too
Helping lovers fall in love every night
Fairy dust makes you say, I love you

 








 

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Written March 12th, 2006

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  • neoladyem
    June 28, 2006
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    This is without a doubt one of my favorites poems you have wrote. Espically for this list. You all ways seem to have the best pictures on this site. My favorite part was the last part:
    "I shall remain their Goddess till I die,
    then a wee fairy I shall become too.
    Helping lovers fall in love every night,
    the fairy dust makes you say, I love you."
    That just really seem to speak to me. Do you share this fairy tale poems with your kids? If you do I bet they get a real kick out of them.

  • bereaved girl of 16
    March 13, 2006
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    this is so amazing! it was so extremely vivid and descriptive and had me imagining things as i was reading them. this was so beautiful! the words and the images, as well as the background and the picture you had to go with it.
    i really liked that fairy picture that you used. it was absolutely gorgeous and fitted in really well with this poem.
    you have done an excellent job. thanks for sharing


  • CountCrimsonAvarus gold member
    March 13, 2006
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    Faith trust and pixiedust -PeterPan yah i love this poem is so awsome and the way you describe her is just awsome and i love the fact that you added a pic it just makes it all the more better excellent write

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    March 13, 2006
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    Beautiful imagery,beautiful sentiment and a beautiful write,well done.Good luck in the contest,love and light ,Yvette


  • bengalibelle
    March 13, 2006
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    This is so beautifully worded.I really felt like I was wandering in the moonlit shadows under the shimmering moss-covered trees.You transported me to a different world.Great write.Well-done.


  • ennovy silver member
    March 13, 2006
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    Enchanting

    Awesome poem with a beautiful balance due to some wonderful rhyming. Your talent is showing, so some of that fairy dust must be on your quill when you composed this.LOL, No!all jokes aside your have done a magnificent job on this very sweet piece of poetic art. write ON!........Ennovy


  • Miss DontTouchME
    March 13, 2006
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    oh beautiful. and fantastic. a lotof fantasy and describing. I like it!
    good luck in the contest!
    Sineana

  • baby-mimi06
    March 13, 2006
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    Beautiful

    This poem was really amazing it was so pretty and such a nice piece i really liked the picture the lady was almost angelic just like this piece of work
    love mimi


  • Owlfire
    March 12, 2006
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    Lovely, nice rhythym and flow, pleasant imagery. The picture and backround chosen also compliment the poem. Enjoyed this read!

  • Sunshinegf
    March 12, 2006
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    beautifull work on this poem

  • icy burn
    March 12, 2006
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    This was good. However, I don't really read much of these types. But I would have to say that it was very descriptive. I received great visual imagery from reading this delightful work. And the colors in the background and the picture just accentuate the writing very well. Good job and keep up the good work.
    -Icy Burn


  • Sandygram
    March 12, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you so very much my friend. You are so sweet yourself to leave such a wonderful comment. Maybe they will fly over there and sprinkle some on you and your love. Swosh!! There they go. They are on their way. Take care, Sandy


  • March 12, 2006
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    What wonderful imagery you create. The picture matches your words perfectly. The tribute to love is fantastic. This part wraps up the poem nicely:

    I shall remain their Goddess till I die,
    then a wee fairy I shall become too.

    Peace be with you.


  • individuality gold member
    March 12, 2006
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    arr so sweet and loving, the fairies are right now skipping with delight because this poem has ben created, their wings are like light in eyes

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