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Acrostic DarkFire-J OneAndOnlyRay

Acrostic DarkFire-J OneAndOnlyRay

Darkfire-J, an ElfLord of renown, asked for magic to his eyes astound
And to have, yours truly, Pixie Crown Princess to by magic confound.
Rather, you asked politely, if I could by magic enhance a Sprite
Keeping her heart ever young but aging her smile romantically just right.
Frankly, yes Pixie Faeries can do much more once true hearts implore.
I thought for an instant by pressing my heart feeling hers before
Reaching a conclusion that yes indeed such magic her soul did seek.
Even as I love my niece  baby Sprite of whom I speak.
Joyous I am to give her everything she ever needs or desires
Only here it takes a little longer spell for what she requires.
Newts sweat, holly smell stirred into empty snail pots of hot bluebells.
Even though it smells, rainbows rises as two lover's names I yell
And you two are summoned through fully grown not one but two.
No longer fourteen and seventeen but twenty four and twenty seven, you
Own this face but inside your hearts are renewed, glued and clean.
Now, you two, OneAndOnlyRay and DarkFire-J may do as your hearts dream.
Love isn't enslaved to age for true heart's commitment it never fades
You've surrendered yourself, as ElfLord to get Pixie Faerie wings and fly
Right to your beloved whom by her own wish welcomes you by.
Although you cannot go back or return again to lost youth's kiss
You have no regrets as you are embraced by your Pixie miss.

by Iohagh

Janet McCall

Author notes

This is what you asked your Crown Princess of Imps and Sprites...  
DarkFire-J:
2 hours ago
[delete ] [history] [reply]  I HAVE A FAVORE TO ASK YOU.
CAN YOU PLEASE REDO OR MAKE ANOTHER OneAndOnlyRay
ACROSTIC PLEASE BECAUSE THE ONE YOU HAVE ON HER,
SHE'S STILL A BABY. MAKE HER A BEAUTIFUL PRINCESS
AND INCLUDE ME PLEASE!!!
THANKS!!!!!!!!!

and I did this spell for you both. Smoosh.
Written March 12th, 2006

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  • sustaind
    March 19, 2006
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    truly one of a kind,Iohagh...love your work


  • Faded Existence
    March 15, 2006
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    Awesome! I loved this! Thank you so much for your entry!
    ~Amber~


  • Iohagh
    March 12, 2006
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    Please read it again since it is now fully corrected and smoosh to both of you before I whoosh.


  • DarkFire-J
    March 12, 2006
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    THANKS SO MUCH IOHAGH SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!
    I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
    Edited on Mar 12, 5:57 p.m. because ''.

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 12, 2006
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    Thank you!!!!! I loved it!! It was cute and sweet!!! AWW!!!! Thank You!!


  • Iohagh
    March 12, 2006
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    already corrected.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    March 12, 2006
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    This is sweet! I found a typo though. You wrote OneAndOnlyJay instead of OneAndOnlyRay. But this was a great write! Continue Penning dear cuzzy!

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