Tears of me, a dark angel, began to shed
As I had to suffer with the amount of blood I bled
How could my father, my flesh make my blood fall like rain
I didn't ever think he would put me through so much pain
As usual it started by him wanting some pleasure
but why from his daughter when he has a wife for that measure
Usually when I said "no" I just got slapped across the face
But not this time, he decided to take it up a pace
I felt him pumping in and out of me
Right in front of my mom's face but she was too drunk to see
You see, no one in my family really cares I'm on this earth
Curse the day, Lord, of my dreadful birth
After that I felt myself being beaten and all I could do was shout
But there was no use because I had already reached a black out
I woke up to people screaming and my body was raining blood
I just cried as my blood came together and resembled a flood
I recognized my self in a hospital room
I was all cleaned up but still I felt a sudden doom
The doctor came in and said as the police was searching our house
My house was quite and that my father was lying there dead like a mouse
He had killed himself because of how his actions affected me
Once again I cried and wonder why is it my life this had to be
Still I wanted him to rot in hell
This was a story that I promised myself never to tell
My father did me wrong and treated me like a nobody
Now he's gone and my self- esteem has risen like I'm somebody
My father used to treat me dirtier than mud
Still though it was his fault that I ever RAINED BLOOD
Author notes
Written March 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Titles!!! Once Again by MoonGoddess69.
300 points, ended March 16, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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TOUCHING
WOW....I'm really sorry that that had to happen to you....i was like in shock while i was reading..i can relate..tho not my father and not to that extent.....This was a great poem and I definitely think you have a good chance!! lol Good luck GREAT WRITE!!!! -
Thank you!! Even though your my opponent in the competion!
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NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you sooo much!!
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WOW, what a great write, I can feel the emotion in this piece, brought tears to my eyes, so sad
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Thank You!
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this is really good, i hope that this didt actually happen to you if it did i hope you have or are gettingover it, i really like the last stana in this but im not sure why, well done, keep on writting and peace out
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Thanks I learned some of it from reading yours and just really taking notes and stuff if you get me! But thanks yours is better though!
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I like this. It is dark and something everybody hates hearing about. But this was very well written. And you really are getting better. Continue Penning!
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Thank you so much daddy! Your the greatest!
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I cannot help but to be sad that you wrote this. These thoughts should never be thought by someone so young. To experience them is even worse. This daddy is only here for your protection and a shoulder to cry on. Whenever you need to talk, my ears are yours! Love and kisses, The Shaker
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