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Napoleon (cinquain)

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Fifty
years I've sat here...
behind this locked door
till they consider me mellow...
...mature..........



Author notes

Napoleon = Brandy  (not the General) often sits in dark deep recesses until it matures.
Written March 12th, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    March 13, 2006
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    Thank you and yes I will keep my eyes peeled

  • cutiepie gold member
    March 13, 2006
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    Glad you enjoyed it I had fun writing it

  • ea silver member
    March 13, 2006
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    Great... I am planning to run a Napolean contest soon and I am defintiely partial to short, punchy poems like this. Be on the look out if you like that theme.
    Edited on Mar 13, 3:30 because ''.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 12, 2006
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    Classic! Made me smile. Very different and totally unique. Deserves an applause. thanks for your entry... x