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Bad!

i close my eyes trying to hold back the flood
i try not to drown through the pain
why doesn't your love come running to me?

i fight this storm in my heart
this hurt this horrible feeling i have
magnefied a hundred times
won't let go of me

so i sit in front of this mirror of mine
glancing at my invisible perfections.
wondering if you'll ever see them

this little mirror of mine doesn't lie
shattered into a million pieces
bringing me a distorted image of you
crying a crimson flood for me

can't you see that i'm always perfect
this mirror of mine doesn't lie
your downcast eyes tell me the truth

i will never be as beautiful as her
i say i'm perfect in every way
this little mirror of mine doesn't lie
shattered into a million pieces.

don't wait for me
i will wait for you

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i don't know what happened to me it just was a diarehha of words
Written March 12th, 2006

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  • Crazy-Love
    March 23, 2006
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    Well, I'm not quite sure i understand yet i do. I've never been one to really read your work but i like it. Anyways keep it up.

    Much Love

    Faith Trust and Pixie Dust


  • Shatteredimage
    March 12, 2006
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