So it's finally come down to this:
I'm searching for love through a [razorblade] kiss.
one s l i t to the wrist is all it takes
to rid myself of my d
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p
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t heart aches
the gentle caress of the -blade- on my skin
a perfect for the pain thats ((within))
release
you'll forget about me, let me f a d e a w a y
until you realize that stench is your best friends decay
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Written March 12th, 2006
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BEst poem i have read all day. great job.
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wow... This is good. And then you rhymed. I don't spend enough time to rhyme. I like this. Good work.
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Very moving.
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creepy, effective, moving, useful, daring, smart, amazing. I swear this is a really good write. I say good job, but it's great work. Keep it all up.
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wow.
wow really powerful. Really nice, I like it! keep up the awesome work.
~Alex~
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omg this is a great poem i feel the same way you do
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