i'm not sure if i know what i'm trying to say
but i'm just damn lonley today
I tried to find a song to post on here
but none of them made it clear
i wish someone else understood
maybe even more than i could
my heart is bleeding
its screaming
it was never whole
i'm so sick of the posers that dont understand pain
but then again they've never seen pain.
will my heart ever mend?
i wish it wouldnt ever break, just bend.
sometimes i wish i would just die
cause i cant even make myself cry
my heart is bleeding
its screaming
it was never whole
never whole
no never whole
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Written March 12th, 2006
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Great poem, great emotion, great voice. "I'm just so damn lonely today"-- very well said. Who can argue with that?
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I can definitely relate. You're right about there not being a rainbow after each storm, but that's what we hope for! I like your repetition of "never whole", it connects the piece and ties it all together. The last stanza is a great ending to a great poem. Keep writing!
~Bri -
Thanks for the comment. it is true that it gets better. but there isnt always a rainbow after each storm. figurativly or in real life.
God bless
-jewel -
very sad, but it will get better, remember there is always a rainbow after each storm, hold your head up and reach for your dreams, you can do it!! and thanks for your comment on my poem, blessings to you
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Very good. I can relate alot.
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my heart is bleeding
its screaming
it was never whole
never whole
no never whole
Lovely, empathic writing, i loved every word. Excellent work.
I felt all of the things you put across, your anxiety and anger, heartbreak, it was all so vivid.
sometimes i wish i would just die
cause i cant even make myself cry
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